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the first time I slept

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by vampiredust08/22/06

A beautiful

poem, wonderfully styled with strong, emotive language. I loved the ending.

Great stuff, mentioned in today's new poem reviews

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by Anonymous08/24/06

lovely

images ...well shaped and styled...with ease...blue

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