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by vampiredust08/22/06

Great

I enjoyed reading this, Lynn. Love your mystical imagery and your metaphorical language.

Mentioned in today's new poem reviews

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by annaswirls08/23/06

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"stolen from a butterfly who flew
too close to desires of a dragon."

this is filled with celebration, very beautiful!

~anna

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by My Erotic Trail08/23/06

Oz-some (awesome)

I am....
dancing away absence
below eyes of a metaphoric master
playing bohemian rhapsodies upside down.
I spin centerpieces of your heart songs


simply awestruck, I very much enjoyed your poem blue~

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