How nice to read a story taking place in the Northern California locale. The reference to the City was a nice touch. The Writer managed to convey the feel of sexual freedom between the three women very well. I found her dialogue to be believable, and at times very endearing. Enjoyable Read!
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Lovely Story!
How nice to read a story taking place in the Northern California locale. The reference to the City was a nice touch. The Writer managed to convey the feel of sexual freedom between the three women very well. I found her dialogue to be believable, and at times very endearing. Enjoyable Read!
Another fine story
You certainly have the gift for pleasureable storytelling, Mary Beth. You keep writing, I'll keep reading. Cheers!
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