Becoming A Slut Husband: Jerry

whoa..

i mean, it might be the first time for a long time, or forever, that u have pictured a true loving wife....

liked her.... didn't like the story very much... but, she deserved 100...

Finally

Bob, thanks you have practised long enough and you finally have written a good one.

Keep up the good work!!

this is more like it! keep it up

don't let the bitchs win,NEVER

Bob go home...it's time for your beddy bye

Or mabey next time the guy's in the gym could just take out an ad in the paper.. Large full page.." I didn't cheat with her at the Christmas party..It was just a friendly kiss...puke Bob I swear sometimes you take leave of your senses...you had better stop sniffing that stuff or you'll grown hair on your palms.

Well done, Bob!

I can see this happening.

The story was well written like all your stories. This was was a kinda fun read. Nice twist.

Regards, DJ

Hmm Mixed feelinga bout this one

So I gave it a decent score.
C

Still Lacking Some Human Emotion

bobie you need to write a nice long Romance Novelette - it will give you a chance to explore showing your true loving emotions in warm human way.

Then when you return to writing pathetic helpless male humiliation stories or placating one's like this there will be some human emotion included.

What do you guys think? Give it some serious thought bobie.

Ha

I gave it a good score too, it is a little strange, even for Bob, but he did use some gray matter writing this one!

Good story, JPB

I dunno what happened but I left a comment last night. I said something about she was a truly loving wife, a REALLY truly loving wife.
Jerry is one lucky man. She is one stoic woman, didn't bat an eye at his confession. Maybe she missed him so much she wasn't fazed by anything he could say?

pattis discretion

Did Patty use the affair that the husband had told her about against?
Pat Murray
Atlanta,Ga

Not all JPB that glitters is cuckolded wimp

Interesting mirror of the usual "cheating spouse" tale. Good prose and interesting characters. He thinks she's cheating so he does to get even only she's not but she says she did so they'll get back together. Convoluted, to be sure, but just whacky enough to be believable. Thanks, JPB, for an entertaining read.

A real loving wife!

It was really refreshing to read about a woman who understood what marriage is suppossed to be about. I liked it.

Liked this one

This was a fun read. The diuble twist made it even better. Thanks alot

thanks Bob

I miss your stories. wish you would come back.

Mike from Texas

Excellent Story

Loved the twist and turns; one of the best storys of yours that I have read so far. Don't get me wrong I have tons more stories of yours to catch up on! But still, excellent... especially the ending

dump the fucking slut, she is lying. she was fucking him.

Well this one was a little complicated

Do we believe the wife WAS fucking Mike and the conversation was a setup? Or do we believe Mike when he told him that he'd never fucked her. A lot of conversations with no real proof of anything. The only thing we know for sure was that he WAS cheating. And you want us to believe that she loved him so much that she was going to forgive his multiple indiscretions? I mean it's a fictional story, but I just don't see her doing that. When he lays out his betrayals to her, I think she slapped him and left. Filed for the divorce and went on with her life. Or I believe that she WAS cheating with Mike and others and that they were really even on the cheating front. Either way, it was entertaining to read. And that's what counts.

Interesting

The biggest problem is that everything was a lie. Even the lies were lies. Oh well.

That was a true clusterfuck.

The problem is that he believed Mike. Both times. The second problem is that he's dumber than a stump. What man overhears a conversation and goes off the deep end? I mean really? He terminates a marriage with a women he loves on the basis of an overheard conversation and does NOTHING to verify it? No how. No way. A man would figure out what was really going on. Not slink away in the night. And then he believes Patty and then Mike - again! I swear he must have air between his ears. He should have realized that he was being played, sent Patty home telling her he would be home after he quit his job and had secured his old job. Then he should have looked for a new job, with a new Company and been more careful about forwarding his mail. Either his old job or the mail gave him away. When he moves this time, be a little more circumspect. Good story, but the ending was unbelievable.

WHEN YOU PUT A LINE IN THE SAND

be strong enough to stay behind it, TK U MLJ LV NV

Women Love Secrets. Secrets Destroy Marriages.

Keeping secrets kill as many marriages as infidelity.

STUPID STORY

Why did they even get married both them are not 2 bright.

even the lies were lies, or were they?

Mike and his two buddies don't work out at that gym in the morning?

Except one day they just happen to work out on a morning.
That just happens to be a morning that Jerry works out there.
They just happen to be in the locker room when Jerry is.
They just happen to have a conversation about Jerry's wife not cheating where Jerry can overhear it.

Seems legit.