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Awesome
loved it, this was very well written, and set the scene well.
Hoping theres more to this coming!
when's the next chapter???
hot story!! well written keep it cumming
very nice
please, continue. It kept my interest, was not unbelievable, and has many twisty storylines to exploit.
I hope for the best :)
When's the next chapter?
This is very well written. Great desciptions of visuals, emotions and thoughts. Totally drew (no pun intended) me in and held me. Keep going, it's going to be good! Eagerly looking forward to more!
Great story!!
Very nicely written! Can't wait for the next chapter!!!
nick
Good work, Zack.
Well written, good dialog. Although the idea of using a woman's past porn pictures as a blackmail device has been used many times before, you make it unique and entertaining.
Now where's the next chapter already?
Jenny
Something very alluring about your style, Sir...
Surely the editor is ready to take this manuscript and put it to print:) I found the whole of it well-written, holding my interest throughout. Even as the fact remains plots drawn around high-stepping females on the corporate ladder being pulled down from their over-stepped rungs by those things inevitably in thier sordid pasts is nothing new in erotica, both print and film, the way in which you approach the concept of it, and furthermore the dialogue between the characters causes this reader to break into a huge smile, realising there's already another chapter of it to take in, once she's sent off this shining review of the first chapter:) Most enjoyed and, of course looking forward to the next of it (might like to learn when I could purchase the finished copy, when it comes off the press) :) Shall bookmark you as a favourite of mine hereafter as well:) Very nicely done with this:)
~fantasia
Great story.
I liked the whole story but, I found the fact that she didn't want to be controlled and resisted a definite turn on. When the sub complies immediately it's unrealistic. After all she has a lot to lose but, she didn't get where she was by being a pushover. Well done.
good start
I enjoyed Jessica's initial spanking and humiliation. I hope she gets thoroughly spanked into submission in Ch 02 ;)
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