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Thank you.
Thank you for a wonderful story, A bit scatty at the begining but the stories message got through. Like you said it's not about sex it's about caring
Thanks again
Wonderful!
A truly wonderful story about love. We often forget that love takes many forms and should remove the blinders to what is really out there! I hope to see many more stories from you.
Lovely Read!
Such an enjoyable story. The dialogue was so natural sounding, the Author has such a deft touch as to make you feel as if you are listening in on the two women's conversations.
Loved the Humphrey Bogart quote at the end. "Louie, this could be the start of a beautiful friendship." So, if this is your first time reading this Writer, perhaps this could be the start of a beautiful Reader/Writer association.
There is very little I can say about this story...
It is probably the best story of any type that I have ever read.
Thank you,
Jack
Just wonderful
So subtle and understated; the erotisim oozed out of evey line.
Although always in hetero relationships myself, I now know why you were so fulfilled.
A sting in the tale
A great story. But that ending was like a sucker punch in the gut, literally. It's good to read a love story that isn't about randy teenagers. Congrats, Mary Beth. p.s. Sorry about the pun.
Loved her to death!
Gee, the ending is SO final! Guess the heroine loved her protege to death - like Maxwell House Coffee's motto, "Good to the very last drop!", heh?
Loving and memorable
marybeth i remarked to this story once before with tears in my eyes and im remarking again I loved reading this story it reminds of the times i lived in that time im 54 yrs old now and i was a teen in the years Betty and her love one but i really loved your story
Pat Murray
Atlanta,Ga
Thank You
Well done. I don't think the ending was all that sudden - I sensed it was near the end for your character's relationship for quite some time. You are a wonderful writer!
Sorrow
I feel her sorrow and her loss for the woman of her heart i lost someone sometime ago and he taught me alot and i still miss him love to you marybeth i pray your heart and soul keep putting out these great stories i love them.
Pat.
Atlanta,Ga.
Wow Factor Off The Charts
I have to say that this was a tremendous story. You are a gifted writer. This story should remind us all that we don't know exactly when the end will be - so live each day to the fullest, dance like no one is watching and love like there is no tomorrow. BRAVO- WELL DONE.
Beautiful
True love and friendship at it finest. Sex is only a perk when the love is there.
Thank you for such a beautiful story.
Not the standard erotica, but well worth the read.
This story is truly a slice of life. It was real while being a weird kind of trip in ways... just like life can be. The ending was a real jolt, but that is also just how life can be.
It's odd, though. Leaving the story there made me feel like I didn't stick around to be with a friend who had to go through that. Even if she never had another Great Love like the one in this story, I think she would have been a good person to know.
Great read.
You just never know when you will find that special person. To share friendship, life, love, happiness.
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