All Comments on 'Vivien Hitches A Ride'

by LiquidPearl

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AzuldrgonAzuldrgonover 17 years ago
Good thoughts...

...but I thought this was a little short. I love the premise of it. The thought of a hot little thing waiting on the side of the road. I love the fact that she was the aggressive one. It was just a little shorter than it could be.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Your Story

HAs been reviewed in the New Story Review Thread in the Author's Hangout.

FallingToFly

holden_2005holden_2005over 15 years ago
oh this was hot

envy that trucker!

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