All Comments on 'Put It Here'

loved every minute of it--get kevin to do her again with blackmail for a sequel

I'd love to see Bob Marshall or other neighborhood boys get in the action.

Don't listen to the nay-sayers... this was smokin' hot, and I for one hope you keep writing... Just hotter'n hell.

I'd like to see Jeff come back to her and beat the shit out of the guy with a camera, in a future chapter, when she tells him that they were photographed. And then perhaps she and Jeff can begin fucking regularly with her getting knocked up with Jeff's baby, and Jeff gradually moving in with her with her husband just turning into a worse drunk and possibly dying from alcoholism?

Too Bad there was not more to this story.

I loved your story. It showed an acceptable amount of detail. Wanted myself to get in the action after you the way you described everything. Keep up the good work!

I like how kevin got her an the reason but didnt like how Jeff treated her. I was hoping that Jeff would leave his cell phone down some where an Kevin get it an get a chance with her again.

I would also like to know when you are going to finish the story of "Dustin's wife Ch#7 or more Ch

Nice story, but the first ending was definitely the better of the two, including the reason.

This story is well told and the plot is believable enough, but quite unexpected, as it plays out. The sex was hot and kept everything rolling ahead, but the story has become complicated enough that there could be a whole lot more. I look forward to that.

I loved this!!

I admit that I loved the story w/ Kevin the best. The idea of a hot teenager is extremely exciting ... especially with the husband and others just seconds away.

ita been a good story so far, please continue,

One of my favourite stories on this site. I keep coming back to it. The fuck with Kevin is just fantastically well written.

didn't need the blackmail. it was erotic enough without it. it would have been good if the kid had just left scared shitless and then the sequel could have been about next time they meet.

I agree

you have to finish this. she should have bit his cock and took the phone

the end suck though continue with the young guy

Incredible

...you shouldn´t begin with it! Nothing is worse than stopping before finishing. Glad you gave up writing...

I love these sort of stories

I liked this tale alot. Thanks for showing us.

I really liked the window part and I ilked the blackmail part I lot less

part 2 please

I enjoyed this story despite all the "nasty" insulting language, i.e., I could do without all the name-calling (slut, whore, bitch, etc.). I must say, given the themes of the last 2 stories I've read, I wish I had run into these ladies when I was 18! And, I'd like to see a sequel to this story, i.e., what happens the next time this "best friend" of Tony, her husband comes back to claim her anal virginity. Perhaps you can shoot (pardon the pun) me an email to advise when you post more stories, especially sequels? (lodgestoney@gmail.com). I also repeat my invitation to check out my stories published here on Literotica! -- StoneyLodge

She had fun with the son's friend so that was good. The disgusting blackmailer should have been just left out. That was not sexy or fun. It was just a huge disappointment.