Very nicely writen. I thought it was great. I read both of the stories. Sorry I didn't comment on the first one, but when you get hooked into a story you just want to read the next chapter.
Keep it going. I will read them all.
Baribrother
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Anonymous08/31/06
Very interesting
Enjoyed both chapters. Looking forward to some more.
What can I tell you? The muse sings what she wants, when she wants. I can only go with the flow. Sorry to anyone who thinks I'm leaving you hanging, not my intention at all.
by
Anonymous10/11/11
more
Please write more like its a good story but its pointless without finishing it right?
by
Anonymous06/30/12
muse shmuse
your just lazy admit it.
by
Anonymous06/07/13
WTF
This is about the worst I have ever read,, I am not a writer and would be embarrassed to put some useless crud like this for anyone to read ,,
what a load of shit, f _ _ _ing awful
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Anonymous03/13/15
Another rushed page. . fuck her virgin pussy in 5 minutes firstime and wants to eat it second time. dumbass wimp story.
Nice
Very nicely writen. I thought it was great. I read both of the stories. Sorry I didn't comment on the first one, but when you get hooked into a story you just want to read the next chapter.
Keep it going. I will read them all.
Baribrother
Very interesting
Enjoyed both chapters. Looking forward to some more.
Great!
This was a great follow up to the first chapter! Can't wait for more..
More
I thought both stories were great, but I want more.
another
it seems we have another turkey writer that get us hooked then drops the story and moves on to another one what a waste
To all those who asked for more:
What can I tell you? The muse sings what she wants, when she wants. I can only go with the flow. Sorry to anyone who thinks I'm leaving you hanging, not my intention at all.
more
Please write more like its a good story but its pointless without finishing it right?
muse shmuse
your just lazy admit it.
WTF
This is about the worst I have ever read,, I am not a writer and would be embarrassed to put some useless crud like this for anyone to read ,,
what a load of shit, f _ _ _ing awful
Another rushed page. . fuck her virgin pussy in 5 minutes firstime and wants to eat it second time. dumbass wimp story.
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