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All Comments on 'Four Little Gnomes Make A Woman's Day'

by bignhairydick

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Great plot

It is a great story and I love the plot. The story could use a lot more description though. Maybe slow it down a bit too. The story jumped from scene to scene much too quickly.

Keep the stories comming, I want more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Good Work

Same as the above comment, everything about this story is great, just add more detail!

foxwichyafoxwichyaover 14 years ago
great

more more more like this

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