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Four Little Gnomes Make A Woman's Day

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous08/31/06

Great plot

It is a great story and I love the plot. The story could use a lot more description though. Maybe slow it down a bit too. The story jumped from scene to scene much too quickly.

Keep the stories comming, I want more.

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by Anonymous09/02/06

Good Work

Same as the above comment, everything about this story is great, just add more detail!

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by foxwichya11/02/09

great

more more more like this

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