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Desiree Wants Sex AND Love

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by duddle14608/31/06

How to Persevere.

Mr. Grigor has taken an odd assortment of characters and crafted an interesting erotic tale. We follow his main character Desiree as she seeks to not only get laid; but, have love as well. A worthy goal!

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by Anonymous08/31/06

The story

it self is ok but it needs to be edited bad.

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by satyricon.2109/01/06

too much too quickly

when i'd done reading this i went back to the beginning and started counting. there are at least three great stories waiting to be expanded here, possibly four, and i'm not sure why you tried to squeeze them into one frustrating tale.

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