So well done! The humor is foremost in the story but still I feel compassion for Viv. She works so hard to set up the perfect romantic encounter for her anniversary, but it is doomed from the start. I love this story!
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The Longing Comes Through
So well done! The humor is foremost in the story but still I feel compassion for Viv. She works so hard to set up the perfect romantic encounter for her anniversary, but it is doomed from the start. I love this story!
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