I found this sexual foray between the main character and his best friend's wife really hot.The text in the story was very graphic, and detailed nicely. In spite of a few problems this story was exciting to read.
The grammar, capitalisation, and spelling were all quite bad. Either English is not your first language or you are just bad at it. Also the idea that out of nowhere she would let him wash her pussy and laughing over the affair rather than being suspicious was rather unbelievable. An editor would have helped this story a lot.
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Anonymous09/01/06
bravo
I loved this story very much a turn on for me. I am in the same situation with the husbands best friend. It's always hot.
English
Sensuous Read!
I found this sexual foray between the main character and his best friend's wife really hot.The text in the story was very graphic, and detailed nicely. In spite of a few problems this story was exciting to read.
good story
I look forward to more from you!
ohio
B'day?
I enjoyed the story but the word is bidet.
Hard to read
The grammar, capitalisation, and spelling were all quite bad. Either English is not your first language or you are just bad at it. Also the idea that out of nowhere she would let him wash her pussy and laughing over the affair rather than being suspicious was rather unbelievable. An editor would have helped this story a lot.
bravo
I loved this story very much a turn on for me. I am in the same situation with the husbands best friend. It's always hot.
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