All Comments on 'Early Riser Ch. 01'

Oh what a wonderful tale you tell and how wonderfully you tell it. I will be the early riser each morning to see what new adventure your voyeur has been through.

Having never written anything I cannot comment except to say that Early Riser Ch. 01 is easy and fun to read and seems to be free of basic spelling and grammar errors.

I look forward to all of your future submissions and will check on your past submissions for more fun.

Thanks and keep up the excellent work!

Rockcrawler

The woman character discovers the art of watching a naked man in the wee small hours of the morning, until he heads for work - fully dressed. She discovers watching to be delicious, secretive, and addictive. Good Story.

I always feel compelled to write when I finish a story. Well written but, so far, the story is pretty ordinary. Obviously there is more to come and I will search them out.