All Comments on 'Joel and Carrie Ch. 01'

awesome story...it reminds me of the fantasies i had in high school..keep 'em coming

Loved it. That kind of openess only happens once. keep them coming

That has to be one of the best stories I have ever read! What a lucky guy. Keep the story going please.

If only high school had been like that! Man oh man this was a very hot read. Incredibly well written, and so erotically charged. I'm looking forward to reading more!

High school would have been a lot more fun like this! Very well written and you described the scenes to where I was seeing them in my mind. A talent that very few can acheive. Please tell me that you are working on a follow-up chapter!

I have never awaited a sequel this eagerly

Incredibly erotic, easy to get into. The story pulled me in and I felt like I was there. More please, soon!

Loved it, there are some great stories on this site, and this now ranks amongst my favourites. 5 all the way.

starting a relationship is hard enough without other sexual involvements.sharing is not what a relationship is about.they haven't had any time to themselves.where is the common sense to the story.

i love this ass story ! Make my ass real horny too....horny3@gmail.com

...it is jarring to read about women wearing bathing suites. How many rooms are they in these suites, and how can they manage to be tightly fitting? Maybe the story might come across as more realistic if they were wearing bathing suits....

a very well telled and writen story, full of ebulient humour, only a bit emphasized!

Your build up was better then your sex. Allright.

my god what a story.

This series is greatness, one of my favorites

But it's nowhere near as filthy as mine is!

I am calling 4 pizza delivery places right now to try to get lucky!!

but im going to stop reading here just because i dont like reading a story that's heading towards sharing with other guys

This was a really well written story, and I like the concept, but I don't think I will continue to read it. I'm not such a huge fan of the whole sharing concept. That being said, it's still an amazingly well written and erotic story, and I'm sure you'll go great places with it, I just don't think it's for me.

Some stories are so hot, that you don't want to finish them, luckily there's a whole bunch of them.

Interesting, with a great build-up. The main character is awesome and you can totally picture what's happening, very erotic.

I love this series. My man always knows when ive been reading them, cause i am ready to go for some hot anal!

the starting and premise were very good...but one guy satisfying 3 sex crazed (very crazed!!!) girls and having sex 5-6 times in a span of 4-5 hours!!! a little realistic would have made it a great story.

This is a great story.... puts me in the mood to grab my bestie and find us a boy to share!

started out really good, then the orgy got a bit unbelievable

Guys that share their women with other males are pathetic.

Wonderful story!