All Comments on 'Watch out for bumble bees'

then why is it i feel like that bubble bee, thickened at the waist. Might trip on me...so watch where you step!...i enjoyed your write today!

be good, be kind, be happy but most of all watch out for the bees <grin I thought your poem was fabulous, reminded me of a poem I wrote about bees that like to hide in open coke cans, don't drink the bee (~_~) bows humble~

Ouch! I think I was stung, so vivid was your writing. :-) Seriously, very interesting poem; I was confused for a moment who was hovering and widening, though, due to a vague referent. You make interesting poems, though WSO. I'm sure many will love this one and I will be sure they see it in New Poems Reviews. C.o.S.

you offer up in this poem. especially the p's in this part--

poised to puncture

the foot of a supposed

predator.

feels good to repeat several times. a vivid poem, makes me miss my garden

lovely work, WSO, enjoyed very much!

But the imagery here is superb!

Excellent job!

Best regards,

C

sounds good in your choice of subject and visuals...blue

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