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ahhhh
then why is it i feel like that bubble bee, thickened at the waist. Might trip on me...so watch where you step!...i enjoyed your write today!
Bee
be good, be kind, be happy but most of all watch out for the bees
vivid
Ouch! I think I was stung, so vivid was your writing. :-) Seriously, very interesting poem; I was confused for a moment who was hovering and widening, though, due to a vague referent. You make interesting poems, though WSO. I'm sure many will love this one and I will be sure they see it in New Poems Reviews. C.o.S.
love the sounds
you offer up in this poem. especially the p's in this part--
poised to puncture
the foot of a supposed
predator.
feels good to repeat several times. a vivid poem, makes me miss my garden
lovely work, WSO, enjoyed very much!
I dont know shit about poerty
But the imagery here is superb!
Excellent job!
Best regards,
C
confronting ones fear
sounds good in your choice of subject and visuals...blue
WEIGHT AND LIFT
play a factor in aero-dynamics as well as wallets. TK U MLJ LV NV salutations, my initials and where I live. mlj
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