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by My Erotic Trail09/02/06

touching...

I felt the passion in your pen (~_~)and the subject matter touched me deeply! Thanks for the read and the memories.

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by LeBroz12/29/06

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A number of multicultural & familial strands woven in here.

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by duddle14601/30/07

Tender

Proving once again ~ love of family knows no boundaries. A very poignant rendering ~ about a man and his adopted daughter.

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