Extremely intense story, an interesting way that his character begins to ponder his sexual needs. Great writing
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10/26/06
Intense
I enjoyed the emotional range and inner dialog as the story progressed. That and the "very" sexy-hot scene against the velvet wall.
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Anonymous02/27/07
cumslut memories
Terrific story. Reminds me of my first time..very similar..and that was 51 years ago! Keep writing and I'll keep cumming.
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Anonymous03/07/07
Good story.
Liked your story. Nice to be taken.
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Anonymous04/08/07
maybe more
how i would love to be seduced, driven mad with lust and taken in the back of a busy bar. my scenario woild continue hoever with being left on the floor and found and used over and over as men discovered me. to be fucked until my man cunt was tender, to have cock after cock pour cum into my mouth and stomach. then when closing time came, to be dragged into the alley, where is was forced to drink golden champagne ahd drenched in the warm goodness. thats a bar i could attend every night.
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Anonymous07/31/07
Scorching ..... but kinda fast
I was happy to find one of your stories finally about a str8 guy who gets seduced; however, I just don't think a guy who hadn't even been bi-curious would go along with all of that, especially kissing, so quickly. More reluctance and seduction -- perhaps with drink, massage, whatever -- would have been more realistic for me. Nevertheless, very hot story. I also like another reader's suggestion that he might have been found like that, naked and ready, by other patrons of the bar, perhaps the skinhead who struck out at the beginning, and "taught" more about all the things he didn't know before.
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Anonymous05/25/08
Mmmm to be used
Your story is breath taking to say the least. I would give anything to be taken like that.
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Anonymous09/13/10
steamy story
I would like to know Julia's reaction when her boyfriend comes back and tells her he just had hot sex with another guy and he pleased him in ways she could never dream of! In addition, he plans to continue seeing the guy, wow talk about painful payback!
I really wish there were more to this story. I know you don't usually continue with your stories beyond the conquest, but this one has serious chemistry.
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Anonymous12/18/11
Hot Hetero conquest
Well-written and well- paced. Liked the way you kept the action moving just ahead of the straight stud's ability to regain control of the situation.
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Anonymous08/05/12
One of the best
This is by far one of the best written most electrifying stories I've run into. In fact, I've gone back to it more than once. Would have liked to have seen more adventures.
English
Absolutely brilliant short story
Erotic and literate. What more can one ask?
whow my fantasy
Wish that was me on the receiving end .
My favourite fantasy to be taken like that .
N.
Whoa
Extremely intense story, an interesting way that his character begins to ponder his sexual needs. Great writing
Intense
I enjoyed the emotional range and inner dialog as the story progressed. That and the "very" sexy-hot scene against the velvet wall.
cumslut memories
Terrific story. Reminds me of my first time..very similar..and that was 51 years ago! Keep writing and I'll keep cumming.
Good story.
Liked your story. Nice to be taken.
maybe more
how i would love to be seduced, driven mad with lust and taken in the back of a busy bar. my scenario woild continue hoever with being left on the floor and found and used over and over as men discovered me. to be fucked until my man cunt was tender, to have cock after cock pour cum into my mouth and stomach. then when closing time came, to be dragged into the alley, where is was forced to drink golden champagne ahd drenched in the warm goodness. thats a bar i could attend every night.
Scorching ..... but kinda fast
I was happy to find one of your stories finally about a str8 guy who gets seduced; however, I just don't think a guy who hadn't even been bi-curious would go along with all of that, especially kissing, so quickly. More reluctance and seduction -- perhaps with drink, massage, whatever -- would have been more realistic for me. Nevertheless, very hot story. I also like another reader's suggestion that he might have been found like that, naked and ready, by other patrons of the bar, perhaps the skinhead who struck out at the beginning, and "taught" more about all the things he didn't know before.
Mmmm to be used
Your story is breath taking to say the least. I would give anything to be taken like that.
steamy story
I would like to know Julia's reaction when her boyfriend comes back and tells her he just had hot sex with another guy and he pleased him in ways she could never dream of! In addition, he plans to continue seeing the guy, wow talk about painful payback!
Awesome Story!
I really wish there were more to this story. I know you don't usually continue with your stories beyond the conquest, but this one has serious chemistry.
Hot Hetero conquest
Well-written and well- paced. Liked the way you kept the action moving just ahead of the straight stud's ability to regain control of the situation.
One of the best
This is by far one of the best written most electrifying stories I've run into. In fact, I've gone back to it more than once. Would have liked to have seen more adventures.
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