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Great Device
Congratulations on a memorable story with a great twist at the end.
Shocled but amused
At first I thought you slipped one past the censors... Nice tryst twist!
Loved it.
I loved your story. It was so exciting and well written. I wish I could write English as well as you do. But then, I was always trying to see up girls' skirts rather than pay attention to my English lessions...
I loved this story
The sex part was fairly predictable (nothing wrong with that--after all, porn is a genre and thus tends to follow a formula). But what I liked was the twist, the ending. I like the relationship between husband and wife that allows them to play games and enjoy the mental stimulation. Sexy!
was wondering
Through most of the story I was thinking "Where's the romance?"
The answer?
A couple keeping their love life from becoming stale.
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