All Comments on 'Victoria the Cookie Girl'

Congratulations on a memorable story with a great twist at the end.

At first I thought you slipped one past the censors... Nice tryst twist!

I loved your story. It was so exciting and well written. I wish I could write English as well as you do. But then, I was always trying to see up girls' skirts rather than pay attention to my English lessions...

The sex part was fairly predictable (nothing wrong with that--after all, porn is a genre and thus tends to follow a formula). But what I liked was the twist, the ending. I like the relationship between husband and wife that allows them to play games and enjoy the mental stimulation. Sexy!

Through most of the story I was thinking "Where's the romance?"

The answer?

A couple keeping their love life from becoming stale.

Clever, clever ending!

WOW

Nice ending.