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Is it sugary?
DG:
Yes! but there are times when that is what we need. Especially with a master story teller; it is so much more pleasant to lay back, relax, and enjoy. Thank You. Ronnie W.
Good Story
As always Another great story by DG Hear, 'The story teller'. I always look for your name regardless of the catagories. Never dissapointed!
An avid reader of your stories.
super sweet
super sweet
fun to read
a DG Hear story cant be beat!!!
Another job well done
Well done. I really look forward to your writings, just keep them coming.
Wonderful as always
DG,
I'm running out of good things to say about your stories, that's kind of neat! I know I'm in for a treat everytime I see a story by you and you have yet to prove me wrong. Thanks for your efforts.
Damn! You have such a great imagination.
You sandbagged me on his wife dying. I assumed
all along he would wind up with Beth but the
route was much more convoluted than I expected.
Great story - one of your best.
If you keep writing all these winners I'm going to have to write a story about you! Hmmm. Let's see: famous writer gets stranded on a tropic island with all the girls from Sports Illustrated's annual swimsuit issue - except, yes of course, they all lost their suits in the surf! Will the famous author write another story or will he ... no! He wouldn't? Would he? Damn straight he would!
Regards, DJ
Excellent
This was an exceptional story. The husband figured out on his own that his wife was a no good trifling ho and didn't have to hurt anybody. He first got the girl of his dreams then later married the woman of his blessings. The murder of the first wife was a nice change in this type of story though tragic in that she never got to realize what a bitch she was and how like her mother she was. An exceptional story indeed.
Thoroughly enjoyable story
Well written, and as the good Bishop said, no violence from the husband.
It was a good variation to remove the need for revenge by the murder.
The only sour note was the birth control thing, BUT it was counterbalanced by Robert's full acceptance of his responsibility.
Well I loved the story, but a tiny bit got me
Good story DG, but the wife's death was kinda strange. Why would the husband, who was sworn to secrecy, who suspected his wife was cheating, tell her at the last minute after he knew the deed was done? After she was filmed doing it that her company asked him to do it? I can see him wanting to cause her some pain, but why do it then instead of after she got home?
I liked the story mainly, but the wife's death seemed not to fit with the rest of the story for me. It seemed really out of place. The character of the ex-boy friend didn't have any real development. Nothing to give me the impression he was capable of this. Maybe thats why the wife's death seemed out of characer. She was killed by someone mentioned in passing, but who took the brunt of this action.
I did laugh when he replaced his wife's birth control pills. What was funny to me was she obviously married him for his money by "claiming" to be pregnant. She never stopped sleeping around. I gotta say I didn't have my sympathy for her once he did that. (^_^)
-Risq
hmmm.
Kinda slow.You know there low level hackers when they are trying to steal 'department store demographic information' from the Company Slut.This is the 21st century "with the all knowing INTERNET" for crying out loud.Makeing an 'laser pointer is an simple 10 minute childproof proceedure' and "anyone can make helmets";conrad got that helmet makeing contract cause he knew the guy that "has the patent on the plastic, and he offerd a good deal on useing one of the companys manufactureing plants," that mr. super-investor-scientist was supplying(or selling his product to) it for the customers who wanted the product manufactured...Remember when I said dont waste my time?.
; )
Great Story
I've always wondered what women like Sandy were searching for. When they were single you figure they're looking for the right one, one they like a lot and one who is happy with them. But marriage doesn't seem to change them much. Whether it still wasn't quite right or what. Sandy sounds like a lost soul; one who HAS to have as many men as she can. She wanted marriage only for the security of it. She still sounds likable, but with a MAJOR fault.
Rob was quite fortunate finding Marie. Kinda like hitting the Mega Millions jackpot. The ending was perfect for him and his family.
Great read.
Wife's death...
really came out of the blue. Workplace violence is a reality but the situation seemed odd. You have Brad, the old boyfriend, at her workplace not knowing about Dave, her boss, but everybody in the company know about it and her slutty ways. Then suddenly, without a promise from Sandy, Brad goes off and kills her.
I do not understand why Brad freaked when she told him about the camera in the comfort room. After all, they did not fuck that night. In any case, the deed was done. I understand why she was upset (She had just fucked Dave) but her disagreement with Brad at that time makes no sense. Sandy had planned according to Dave to leave her husband that night so why did she involve Brad? If the company did not care about who fucked who, her only exposure was Brad who she provided unauthorized access to company files. She should have distanced herself from Brad and called Dave to get the tapes (if possible)and to circle the wagons.
Bottom Line: Excellent Story! Thanks for writing!
SleeplessinMD
Great Story
Another great story by DG Hear. You are one of the best.
She who plays with fire…
Why was wife ready to risk her plans for a ‘husband upgrade’, or even just continuing her sex games safely by risking her job security? Giving company secrets to Brad in return for sex seems uncalculated, and thus against character for her. As far as her death, I can totally see how someone who plays with fire (as she was playing with peoples’ emotions) would sooner or later get burned.
Thanks for the enjoyable read!
Hey real good job
more...more...more...
great story
As usual u have written down an amazing story ... but only one complain..please make ur submissions more frequent..
Another great one!!!!
As I have said before, to me, DG Hear means well written top quality stories that keep us coming back for more! This story is again as realistic a portrayal of life and marital relationships that I have ever read on LITEROTICA. The hero deserved and got a second chance at happiness and those of us who love ‘Happy Endings’ should be very happy with this one! A great writer once wrote “I believe life is what you make it. Sure everything isn't perfect but you have to give it your best shot. If you try hard enough, you can make it. Don't worry about what someone else has. Look at your own life and your family's life and see what you can do with what God gave you”. What more is there to say? DG, Keep them coming. Pete.
So nice
to have such a
sweet and sour,
true-to-life tale
Very impressive!
How do you do it? Very impressive!
You have manage the story very well. I must really comment that this story was abit out of ordinary.
Great job!
Glad to be your reader
Impreesed
I've read most all of your stories, and enjoy the vast majority of them (some are not my taste?) What I most enjoy is the stories have what appear to be real people in real situations and your writing, with grammar, spelling, punctuation, etc. is very easy to follow and very engrossing. I've found myself looking up after reading one of your stories and realizing that it's way past my bedtime.
Thank you for your works and I encourage you to continue in your efforts. You are appreciated.
Larry Branaman
fallbran@yahoo.com
Beths father- asshole
Starnge- Beth's father dont like her daughter date whites, but himself have Italian wife. Such an asshole. Interesting- is it really possible in real life...
Over Protective Father
If you think Beth`s Father is Hard he`s nothing compared to my dad when my sister would start to date he screened everybody.
Atlanta.Ga
very nice
I normally prefer stories with more of a graphic description of the sex.
However,i thoughrouly enjoyed reading this syory from start to finish.
I`m a sucker for happy endings.
Very well done.
This was sweet!
Liked the story!
Well, that was dfferent
Usually these stories have some great sexual content, but this one seemed like a real life love story. I enjoyed it from start to finish. Don't tell me they didn't have any kids together????
how
How do these people survive let alone have degrees and own there own businesses, you got them made out to be so stupid it ruins your stories.
Another fine story DG.
I really enjoyed this one, especially the happy ending. Thanks for all you do, D.G., you are definitely one of the very best.
Loved It
I read your more recent work and decided to go back and read some of your older stuff, I'm glad I did, It's good to be able to go back and read some real stories that mean something. Don't stop writing, There are not that many good writers out there any more.
I enjoyed the story
The stories by D.G. Hear that I've read are all top-notch. Each focuses on an aspect or human relationship common to American life, and each story is typically well handled by the D.G. Hear.
One thing though: I don't recall from my kids when they were 1 yer old Back in the 1960's), but is a one year able to open his/her birthday gifts (properly)?
Also, within the story something was mentioned regarding a mother or gradmother of Rob's first wife as being in her 60's and not able to care for babies. Nowadays, 60 year old's (even 70 year old's plus people) preform all kinds of activities that 50 year age was more uncommonly preformed. I am retired but have been recalled since retriement to teach medical students and I'm in my 70's.
All best wishes. Bartolo
He is dishonest.
He promised Jim he wouldn't tell anyone about the cameras but he told Sandy so that was a lie. Therefore, contrary to the story image, he is a person of poor character.
He is dishonest II
DWornock should get credit for starting my thought process. Not only did the hero reviel the existance of the camera but it could very easily say contributed to the death of his wife.. Even more damming is it was done out of spite rather than accidental goof.
I normally rather enjoy this author, but the entire thing was just a little vanilla for me.
Can't hit a homerun every time, but for me there it is
He is dishonest III
Yeah he is so dishonest, a person of such poor character. Sandy was just the picture of perfect virtue. If either of the Two Einsteins below me can't figure it out I was being sarcastic..... Great story DG don't let the haters get to you these stories are your art.
I still liked it -
I found the failure point where he told her (after she was done) that the camera existed a poor exercise in judgement but not horrible in its intent just is impact. As for dishonest - technically yes but certainly one of the least significant lies in this or most stories.
His contract with Jim had been essentially fulfilled when they found out the brad's login was used when Brad was in the space and that Sandy was the likely conduit for the exchange - this was not a law enforcement sting with hard rules of evidence to preserve and he was not a cop.
Like may of DG's stories it was painfully realistic in its portrayal of people.
A NEW MEANING TO COUCH TATER
and at the office. TK U MLJ LV NV
oh no
he told the cheating bitch the truth after she had been lying to him and she got killed - who the fuck cares. glad the cunt is dead and the reason for it is of no moment. she got killed because she was a cheating slut and got caught, not because she learned there was a camera. if she had not been a cunt she would never have been affected by the camera.
It's always easiest to kill off a problem character.
So very easy.
bymyself13
how come,that while that guy is so intellegent there always are so stupid
when it is about woman?
the only thing stupid about this story was
the comments by Dworslock and auhunter04
fantastic story
I truly enjoyed the story and the characters. There was a great amount of emotion and description in this story that complemented the intrigue and plot. Thank you.
everytime a slut dies
you see a smile on someones face.
***
Not so bad a story, I even enjoyed large parts of it. One thing I don't understand however: you build this geek up as a whiz-kid who can get top grades at the drop of a hat and call him this successful businessman, yet he's only the boss and owner of a two or three employees computer repair business. One doesn't need much of a fancy college degree for that and I wouldn't think him to be the most successful person from a whole high school graduation class. In short, why would the head bitch want to try to trap him when there must have been other targets out there, some equal or superior to him? Please try it with more realism next time!
what a mess...
bad plot, bad characters, badly written. shitty story. 1/5.
No Fault
A very well told tale. Good plot. A bit to short. Enjoyed it a lot.
Thanks Jack
5
Duh
The word for her is ZEBRA.
good story
there's a lot of truth in this story, at least about life.
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