All Comments on 'Oliver's Lesbian Surprise'

by SarumBoy

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gotranegotranealmost 16 years ago
Short And Sweet!

Good story, but a little too short for my taste. Would've been a lot better if the build up between Naomi and Francessca lasted longer. The "getting caught" factor would've been nice, too.

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