Abduction Ch. 10

super!

absolutely love this story.

more soon!

I love this story.. please continue it.

Great story...

I don't come to this site that often, but have now found myself logging on and searching for this story.... great work...

Thank goodness u decided to give Teri a break... looking fwd to the part in which she has the upper hand for a change... keep up the good work and yeah, please do update soon!

love your work, but...

I really do love all your work, and I read all your stories. But I am still having trouble with this ridiculous culture. I think there are a few discrepancies as well. I don't understand how there are whores if women are so rare, wouldn't that not be allowed, though I suppose if the society is as patriarchal and sexist as it seems than that actually does make sense .

I would love it if you wrote more of these stories (I totally am re-reading them for a third time) but showed the evolution of the society from totally unequal and very unstable and weak to one of equality, where women aren't treated as possessions, which would probably help the society become more stable. If you expounded more on the society and its issues that would be cool too. Like what exactly are the rebels fighting for?

Also if I were these women no matter how much I loved my mate, I wouldn't be able to stay unless I was treated as a sentient human being, an equal and if I was able to work. Otherwise I would slowly lose my sense of self, and I wouldn't be the person my mate fell in love with. I think that would be an interesting topic to explore.

Anyways, just my 2 cents, love your stories, thank you for sharing them with us!

agree with marexotic18

there are just some discrepancies that need to be polished and this would be a far easier story to read. Obviously I am entertained as I have read parts 1-10 but I really think it could be soo much better

Dry opinion

Short

sexual prowess?

How would he have any conscidering there arent any females to practice on?

i wondered about the existence of prostitutes in a world that is almost out of women also. its just a minor detail though...hella v a series so far.