by longingforlove
...it was quite nicely done. You may not be a seasoned writer or a professional writer yet but you have the concept to make this a true non consent/reluctance story. You let us read her thoughts, her defiant thoughts despite the fact her body was yielding. It wasn't that your heroine like those other female leads that fell instantly in love with their abductors/dominators after seeing how physically attractive they were. Your heroine did struggle, which was good.
Just expound your story more and it will be even better.
Thanks
Played right into my fantasies, most arousing read this girl has read in a long time! More please
Please please please finish this series! I love it, you write very arousing stories.
This was a fantastic read. I love Alex's character and his arrogance when dealing with Julia. I was extremely aroused when Alex spoke to Julia. The pet names are a great touch. Please, please write more!!