All Comments on 'The Bridge Game'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Very Hot & Erotic.

Will there be other Bridge games just as hot or even hotter? I hope so.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Good reading!

But could have been better. He needed to plant his cum in her belly, if she is going to entice him this way.

RedHairedandFriendlyRedHairedandFriendlyover 17 years ago
Not bad at all

I enjoyed the story, would have liked a bit more time spent on the act and the after effects he had going through his mind after all this happened too, as he sat there playing cards and remembering.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Some thoughts

I think there should have been more buildup to the bridge game. Are you going to make this into a series? Anyway, good job.

--Harold

vastiesmith2vastiesmith2over 8 years ago
If dear annony wants the story finished I say fuck him

I gave you a5

chytownchytownabout 2 years ago

***Nice short and hot. Thanks for sharing.

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