I enjoyed the story, would have liked a bit more time spent on the act and the after effects he had going through his mind after all this happened too, as he sat there playing cards and remembering.
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Anonymous09/15/06
Some thoughts
I think there should have been more buildup to the bridge game. Are you going to make this into a series? Anyway, good job.
English
Very Hot & Erotic.
Will there be other Bridge games just as hot or even hotter? I hope so.
Good reading!
But could have been better. He needed to plant his cum in her belly, if she is going to entice him this way.
Not bad at all
I enjoyed the story, would have liked a bit more time spent on the act and the after effects he had going through his mind after all this happened too, as he sat there playing cards and remembering.
Some thoughts
I think there should have been more buildup to the bridge game. Are you going to make this into a series? Anyway, good job.
--Harold
If dear annony wants the story finished I say fuck him
I gave you a5
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