i like the character development and background. this would be a great first chapter....
The juxtaposition of conventional misgivings with the inevitable direction of the characters is very imaginative and strikes me as rather a clever approach to a stimulating and well written stroker.
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good start....
i like the character development and background. this would be a great first chapter....
First Rate
The juxtaposition of conventional misgivings with the inevitable direction of the characters is very imaginative and strikes me as rather a clever approach to a stimulating and well written stroker.
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