But you need an editor. For example: you wrote "PEAK" (the top of a mountain), when you meant "PEEK".
Waiting for Chapter 2.
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Out of all the stories I've read on this web site, I've enjoyed this one the most. I love the fact that she is a little leary of her not so perfect body. He treats her like a lady and is not overly rough. Please write more!
Nice beginning
But you need an editor. For example: you wrote "PEAK" (the top of a mountain), when you meant "PEEK".
Waiting for Chapter 2.
Loved It!
Out of all the stories I've read on this web site, I've enjoyed this one the most. I love the fact that she is a little leary of her not so perfect body. He treats her like a lady and is not overly rough. Please write more!
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