All Comments on 'Double-Jointed'

by Man Ray

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Pure Sex!

This poem and erotic image conjures up thoughts and visions of such a sexual nature that I want to make love.

Failing that I'll need a cold shower!

My Erotic TrailMy Erotic Trailover 17 years ago
poetic...

...pictorials! You not only got the hang of it... you do it well (~_~)

Maria2394Maria2394over 17 years ago
colors

in this are absolutely beautiful, and the words that accompany are even better. Your illustrated poems are getting better with every submission and I find myself looking for them :)

maria

IrishBayouIrishBayouover 17 years ago
Blow Me Down!

She's a pistol! ;-) and she ain't afraid to show it! An outrageous spread 'em image 'neath a quaint haiku! Marvellous!

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Sorry but

All I see is a stupid flower. Looks pretty though, but erotic??? Hell na!!!

Whats it called so I can get it for my girl next Valentinz

forest_femmeforest_femmeover 17 years ago
Felicitations

Would have helped in gym class! Spectacular illustration and haiku; keep up the good work.

Man RayMan Rayover 17 years agoAuthor
My Erotic Trail/Maria2394/IrishBayou/forest_femme

Please accept my belated thanks for your good-hearted comments.

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
planting.

"Inspiring a poet's quill..." Lovely flower with it's pollen ready to be given. Lovely ethereal rendering.

AmyfriendAmyfriendabout 17 years ago
Waiting..

waiting.. for the stamen

LeBrozLeBrozabout 17 years ago
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Excellent pairing of illustration with thought. And someone actually got it right in those comments below. For once this really is a haiku.

tazz317tazz317over 12 years ago
FROM WHENCE CUM INSPIRATION

into my brain. TK U MLJ LV NV

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