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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous09/15/06

Pure Sex!

This poem and erotic image conjures up thoughts and visions of such a sexual nature that I want to make love.

Failing that I'll need a cold shower!

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by My Erotic Trail09/16/06

poetic...

...pictorials! You not only got the hang of it... you do it well (~_~)

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by Maria239409/16/06

colors

in this are absolutely beautiful, and the words that accompany are even better. Your illustrated poems are getting better with every submission and I find myself looking for them :)

maria

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by IrishBayou09/16/06

Blow Me Down!

She's a pistol! ;-) and she ain't afraid to show it! An outrageous spread 'em image 'neath a quaint haiku! Marvellous!

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by Anonymous09/16/06

Sorry but

All I see is a stupid flower. Looks pretty though, but erotic??? Hell na!!!

Whats it called so I can get it for my girl next Valentinz

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by forest_femme09/17/06

Felicitations

Would have helped in gym class! Spectacular illustration and haiku; keep up the good work.

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by Man Ray10/11/06

My Erotic Trail/Maria2394/IrishBayou/forest_femme

Please accept my belated thanks for your good-hearted comments.

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by duddle14612/23/06

planting.

"Inspiring a poet's quill..." Lovely flower with it's pollen ready to be given. Lovely ethereal rendering.

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by Amyfriend01/29/07

Waiting..

waiting.. for the stamen

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by LeBroz02/03/07

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Excellent pairing of illustration with thought. And someone actually got it right in those comments below. For once this really is a haiku.

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by tazz31701/17/12

FROM WHENCE CUM INSPIRATION

into my brain. TK U MLJ LV NV

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