All Comments on 'The Silver Moon'

by DamianaVitrea

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Good Start, but too Short

I liked your story and would have rated it higher, but its too short. By the time you get into it, you're at the end. Surely you could have continued it, even if the couple needed to leave the club to play.

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