Excellent build-up, and a surprising end. It left me wanting to read more... did they, or didn't they? It would be fantastic to read the sequel where he is at the receiving end, and then finally the coming together into a crescendo! I hope you have a sequel in mind.
Great story.....
Excellent build-up, and a surprising end. It left me wanting to read more... did they, or didn't they? It would be fantastic to read the sequel where he is at the receiving end, and then finally the coming together into a crescendo! I hope you have a sequel in mind.
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