All Comments  for

Othsmeet Ch. 01

byabekast©
All
Comments (6)
by Anonymous

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Jorel145509/12/06

YES!!!

Wonderful, magic with a little spice - just the touch needed. Keep up the good work - a continuation of the two of them and some stand alone pieces will be fine. Get writing, you do not have much time unless you do it by magic. J.

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Bibliodrak09/13/06

And a second YES!!

Loved it! More stand alones in the same city sound fun but please don't forget about Jasha and Emerald, having a few stories of how Jasha first started his adventures or some of Emeralds more memorable and fun nights would be great as well as maybe having Jasha "corrupt" some of his fellow students by convincing them to go out on the town and introducing them to some of Emeralds friends and coworkers. Maybe have one of Jasha's former conquests decide that she really wants a second encounter...

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Mistress_Joli09/13/06

Excellent

Keep up this story line. It is great.

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Anonymous09/15/06

YES

A rogue magician has been done a thousand times. A rogue magician who has no morals almost never love it i would like to see more of what your imagination has in store

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by 09/15/06

This was wonderful

well written, hot sex, the language just flowed wonderfully. I'd love to read more, especially of Jasha, sounds to me like he needs one of these women to shatter the shell around his heart. Great job.

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by kushielschosen12/27/06

Great!

Ohh PLEASE continue this story!!! I loved both characters...and since I'm such a sappy romantic, I totally agree with the couple of comments before me that wanted Emerald to be the one to shatter the shell around Jasha's playboy heart!

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.

Click here to leave your own comment on this submission!  or
Back to Othsmeet Ch. 01  or
More submissions by abekast.

Add a
Comment

Post a public comment on this submission (click here to send private anonymous feedback to the author instead).

Post comment as (click to select):

You may also listen to a recording of the characters.

Preview comment

Forgot your password?

Please wait

Change picture

Your current user avatar, all sizes:

Default size User Picture  Medium size User Picture  Small size User Picture  Tiny size User Picture

You have a new user avatar waiting for moderation.

Select new user avatar:

   Cancel