All Comments on 'Blow Job Asleep'

im a woman whose bi-curious. id love to do that with a female friend - mayb i will sumday.

There are so many grammar and spelling errors that I don't even know where to start. Get an editor.

great hot story and glad to see you love your friend.

Enjoyed it but maybe your grammer could be improved a lil, it'd make it easier to read :) Plus whats a doona? I've never heard of that before

hey gr8 story,reminded me of my youngr days,just wish my friend did wake up n return da favour,he nvr did :(

Wish i could have a sleep blow job from my boy friend. I will give him one and ask him to do me great way to have sex.

You really need to work on your writing skills. You need to learn to use different words. It's a bit boring to read "I grabbed his dick, I licked his dick, I swallowed his dick." Also, it's very unprofessional to use blunt words SUCH as 'dick'. You should use more subtle words such as 'member' or 'shaft'.

Now, you also need to work on your run-ons and fragments. Towards the end, where you said "I reluctantly remove his dick from my mouth and kissed his thigh, he grabbed my arm and moved me around and kissed me full on the lips, I nearly cum, I moved back to the other couch with my dick still raging hard," I almost face-palmed. That's nearly a paragraph's worth of ONE sentence, not to mention the fact that you cut in with 'I nearly cum.'

You should work on your writing skills, rewrite this story, and THEN repost this story. I would honestly love to read it again without having to leave an insulting comment, feeling like a total asshole. Honestly, great story.

Good story just need better grammer skills.

Great story but there's a little problem with your grammar w/ practice it will be a perfect sexy story

wow that story should be turned into a movie...great and BTW you can suck my cock lol

I'm sorry mate, that seems really sad. Great story though!

:D

i do the exact same thing to a mate of mine called rhys but hes makeing sure i do less and less each time but your story reminds me about it but you can suck mine any time you want

This has always been my thing. I love doing it. I just glad to see someone else is having fun also.

I stayed over at a friend's house the other evening. he took a shower before bedtime, and as I was coming up the stairs he let his towel slip. although I'm straight, i couldn't help notice his well hung penis. He looked over to me and said 'hey I didn't see you there. I was so nervous after that. When he was asleep, I crept into his room and took pleasure in putting my mouth around his penis. As it started to get erect, he stirred, probably aware of what was going on, but continued to sleep, or pretend to. I thoroughly enjoyed doing this, but promptly stopped. At that point he stirred and called out 'oh Lisa i've missed you......so I continued until he came tons into my mouth. I slipped out of the room, and nothing was said from that point on.

lol am a strait guy but id you to wake up with someone sucking my hard cock

i'm a str8 gay but i wonna see how it feel to get my dick sucked by another just this once :) holla @ me if your up 4 it jerome_rs@hotmail.co.uk

i am a bi guy and i will suck anyone off that wants me to just e-mail me at mweaver@innova.net and ill send you pics and drive to your house for a good suck if you like

i live in janesville wisconsin and my e-mail is jarjar1200@yahoo.com

To all you weak arseholes that have left derogatory comments as Anonymous. You can all go FUCK your useless selves. It wasn't meant to be a profesional peice.

It was a very nice story indeed, although I felt it could use a bit of work. I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. Props.

3 things I want: To have someone stand in front of me with their pants down letting me lick, kiss & suck their dick and lick their balls; For someone to cum A LOT all over my face; And to suck someone's dick while they're sleeping. I've never been interested in guys, I just love dick and think about the one I sucked yrs ago every day & wish someone would let me again

Was a great story.. Hot. Your friend sounds delicious, and I've always wondered if anyone actually slept, or if they just pretend to, while their being blown. Thanks for sharing your experience. It all sounds plausible so difficult to decide which parts might be pure fabrication. lol