All Comments on 'New Skin'

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NirvanadragonesNirvanadragonesover 17 years ago
You amaze me. . .

you know you do.

impressiveimpressiveover 17 years ago
Consistent and concise

Your voice weaves through this piece in a way I can feel, and the metaphor is well-executed. Very nice work -- on multiple levels.

cloudycloudyover 17 years ago
yes, indeed...

I'm familiar with this feeling (share the snake).

arienettearienetteover 17 years ago
Wow

I love it that you're experimenting with poetry more and more, it makes me happy. So when you reading some of these? *grin*

cherries_on_snowcherries_on_snowover 17 years ago
engaging

caught and held in the coils of this poem.

BelegonBelegonover 17 years ago
A powerful metaphor...

...and well applied. A strong voice here, speaking about it's subject with passion. A fine read...and like Ari, one I would like to hear read with the emphasis of the poet's own specific emotion in each line.

My Erotic TrailMy Erotic Trailover 17 years ago
mention

this poem was mentioned in the new poem reviews thread

Honey123Honey123over 17 years ago
Great job

in expressing your feelings in such a wonderful poem....

Honey

Goldie MunroGoldie Munroover 17 years ago
Loved It

Abs, I loved this poem - creepy, gut wrenching imagery and a perfect metaphor - really made me stop short and think...

FallenfromgraceFallenfromgraceover 17 years ago
Emotive

I wanted to say 'thanks' but i wasnt sure what i would be thanking you for, i really love this poem, and i think you have captured the element of such indecision and the memories of the good and the bad so well. Absolutely wonderous.

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