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by cherries_on_snow09/09/06

Although

I am not in love with this (it is too brief and I'm not that easy) I am in like with it. It's heady and makes me think of potions! yummy. Mentioned in New Poems Reviews.

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by KOLKORE09/09/06

Man!

I think I AM in love, at least a little bit, with this poem.
Especially inspiring was the dance stanza: “Eye to eye and skin to skin / When shall our next dance begin”. Although rhythmically not perfect, it still worked for me in setting the tone to the whole poem. I could actually imagine a sensual close dance to the rhythm of the poem. Yea, dance is a great metaphor (and reality) for erotic tension and sensuality

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