Has been mentioned in the New Story Reviews thread on the Lit forum (Author's Hangout).
Sorry - it was boring and predictable. What was erotic about it?
It was almost poetic... I hope you write more. janiexx
hope you continue the story
it was beautifully written and definitely erotic. It deserves a much higher rating than it currently has.
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Has been mentioned in the New Story Reviews thread on the Lit forum (Author's Hangout).
Sorry
Sorry - it was boring and predictable. What was erotic about it?
Liked your style of writing...
It was almost poetic...
I hope you write more.
janiexx
Got a good feel to it
hope you continue the story
Got a good feel to it
hope you continue the story
i enjoyed it -
it was beautifully written and definitely erotic. It deserves a much higher rating than it currently has.
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More submissions by maximoparkch.