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His Merlot

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by Anonymous

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by vampiredust09/10/06

Fragrant

I want to sip this slowly, so I can fully appreciate its wonderful textures and flavours

Mentioned in today's new poem reviews

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by cherries_on_snow09/10/06

Full

of flavorful alliteration. yum.

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by My Erotic Trail09/10/06

quenching...

... my thirst for a blue read. (~_*) sipping your literary write, I enjoyed your poem Blue~

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by oregon_gal09/10/06

delightful!

a sweet toast to you!

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by oregon_gal09/10/06

delightful!

a sweet toast to you!

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by Syndra Lynn09/15/06

brilliant, sister dear

Fragrance lay in whisperings
trembling in contours of glowing mouths.

~as always

Syn

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