by kayandsteve69
Are you going to continue with the story you have a great story please dont leave us hanging here continue with more chapters with more spice to the story.
Pat .
Atlanta,Ga.
Don't stop here. Keep the story going. You can eventually involve other members of the group.
Kayandsteve69 must be congratulated for writing such a hot story the first time out. If this story is any indication of their talent - Watch Out! If you want something to enjoy - Cum to the party. Hot Story!
I've read programs at funerals that had a more exciting ending...sheeesh!
The most important and exciting part of any story is the Will they? Will they? Oh God, they are really going to do it. Wow-The decision is made-Good for them-Me? I know how good it feels I don't need someone else to tell me.
I hope you continue with the story. I got very wet reading this one.
super release thanks to your wonderful story, wow what a cum...thanks6763
I have so much desire to do this with my friend Judy. When I've approached her she tells me she just can't: she must not let herself have anything but straight relationships. I take care of her animals when she's away, and I can't control myself. I find panties in her hamper and sniff them and press my face into the panel.
I like the way that your story built up to the sex between Kay and Kelly. I think that it would be even better if we knew the characters a little more. Develop them more in the beginning so that your readers can feel the connection more. I know that you have written more about Kay and Kelly, but the rest of the women were just kind of there. A group of friends, but we don't even know their names.
Paragraph 12: "You're family won't be home...."
Let's hope the writing couple of Kay and Steve have polished their storytelling skills in the interval between their last Lit entry and now.