All Comments on 'Dare You'

by Icecubez

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asiaprofasiaprofover 17 years ago
Nice one...

Short, sweet, simple and sexy

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
all over too quickly

it began well, but then you decided to skip past the foreplay and go straight into the sex, which is all over in a couple of lines

yakboy69yakboy69almost 17 years ago
More.

It was all going so well then pop! it was over I so wish you had taken the time to work this story as it has great potential.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Out of Breath

Good story, I enjoyed it

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