All Comments on 'Wedding-Night Jitters'

by Man Ray

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IrishBayouIrishBayouover 17 years ago
Congratulations!

Yet another haiku that weds style and imagery perfectly! I gather oysters on the half shell were the groom’s wedding menu decision.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Nice bit of work!

Tell us, did wedding bells pop?

forest_femmeforest_femmeover 17 years ago
Big Gulp!

We need...but they were good jitters! Keep it up!

GoderichGoderichover 17 years ago
Just right...

your tornado-like illustration is just as a honeymoon should be. I like it!

PopplettePoppletteover 17 years ago
Why jitters?

I think it is better to have trembles but this one is nice too.

LeBrozLeBrozabout 17 years ago
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Very creative illustrated haiku.

tazz317tazz317about 12 years ago
THE DRINK FOR LOVE

squirt-n-cider, TK U MLJ LV NV

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