Wow! And that was just your first story? Keep writing like that and you won't be lonely for long. Nice descriptions and emotions. You have a knack for drawing the reader in. Congratulations!
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Anonymous09/20/06
Sweet!!!!
Funny, when white women write IR stories, they are sweet and romantic and emotional, when white men write them, they are so negative and hateful o about cuckolds. I wonder why its like that.
The oldest woman I ever had sex with was 32, I am 25. Now your story made me start to think, am I missing out on something. All mature women (of all races) are in trouble now, and its all your fault, you kinky, sweet MILF. Keep it up and wish you fun in life.
Your female character is a refreshing take on mature women. I admire your honesty, no frills - what you see is what you get
approach.You have written a warm sweet story weaving into it many of the elements that make us what we are. An inspired bit of writing. Congrats! on your first story.
Always great to read a woman's perspective. Loved your angle of the "innocent" mom type. Hard to find fault with a really enjoyable story. Keep writing and look forward to your next one.
And hot too. I liked the way you started it. Now I'll be looking at random, normal women and wondering what goes on in their minds, in the privacy of their homes, behind closed doors.
(The thermometer is not a vote. It's just been left at default.)
This was great for a first effort, LM. I caught a few spelling mistakes, but that didn't make this any less of a sweet story. You should be very proud of your work.
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Anonymous09/26/06
Skillfully Respectful & Lusty
Finally an interracial story that wasn't warped or sick.
Why can't others understand what you do. We (the semi-norm)can get into the black on white if it is part of the story and the characters and you respect each other and us.
What a start milady. Sensitive and shyly direct connect here and made this a very good read.
We have so few good erotic stories about women in their forties or even fifties that I rejoice when I read a well written one. It has always been a pet peeve of mine that women in our age group are so seldom written about in erotica. Kudos to you and I look forward to your second effort.
Wonderful little story! Some authors struggle for years to pack so much feeling, emotion, and history into such a few words. I hope that you are serious about this gift that you have. Either you have one hell of an erotic imagination or you have suduced your tennis instructor. No matter that he was an easy mark! The truely beautiful part of the tale is the self realization that your protagonist gained and the healing that your readers are privileged to witness in this little gem.
I don't have much interest in the subject you wrote about, but your writing skills and talent are obvious. I always enjoy a well-written story. Keep up the great work.
Very sensual, it affects me in the most wonderful way. I could picture this with ease. Thank you, though I would like Mark to be a little less confident. Perhaps for a moment. I found it very sexy indeed.
I read a lot of porn. This is not porn, it is however erotica at it's best. I suppose I should have read the other stories and compiled all my comments but was so taken with the excellence of this piece I had to drop a note immediately. Don't worry, I will be reading the rest as I am sure they will be as good or better. Will write again when I get to the juicy end. Thanks again to the author for her efforts.
I loved the realistic feelings you portrayed as you switched back and forth between your experiences as an older divorced wife and as the lover of a younger man.
Your story is terrific. Well written, but a profound lesson on how we perceive each other. All of us, young and old should read it. Stop and tell those "invisible" woman and men you encounter every day, how great they look. I've done it and was told how I made someone's day with one small comment.
English
Damn Good
You write well, I was there, watching you and I wanted you too. I hope you keep up the good work, on this site and with him.
Let me clear the steam off my monitor.
Wow! And that was just your first story? Keep writing like that and you won't be lonely for long. Nice descriptions and emotions. You have a knack for drawing the reader in. Congratulations!
Sweet!!!!
Funny, when white women write IR stories, they are sweet and romantic and emotional, when white men write them, they are so negative and hateful o about cuckolds. I wonder why its like that.
The oldest woman I ever had sex with was 32, I am 25. Now your story made me start to think, am I missing out on something. All mature women (of all races) are in trouble now, and its all your fault, you kinky, sweet MILF. Keep it up and wish you fun in life.
Very nice!
Great first story! Keep writing. I can't wait to see how your writing style evolves and grows!
Sex, seven... or even eight
(Aparently Not-so-)LonelyMom,
Why does the vote have to stop at ONLY 5???
This work was near-perfection in erotica, and I can't think of a single criticism or suggestion to make it better.
WOW! And I don't know if I'll be able to pass one of those seemingly-anonymous 48 year old hockey moms in the grocery store ever again.
ENCORE! ENCORE!
like Chocolate-filled jalapenos...
I enjoyed the sweetness and the heat. What a fun read, quite nicely written- an great debut!
A Slice of Real Life!
LM,
Your female character is a refreshing take on mature women. I admire your honesty, no frills - what you see is what you get
approach.You have written a warm sweet story weaving into it many of the elements that make us what we are. An inspired bit of writing. Congrats! on your first story.
Lovely story.
Always great to read a woman's perspective. Loved your angle of the "innocent" mom type. Hard to find fault with a really enjoyable story. Keep writing and look forward to your next one.
Very realistic
I think you wrote a very good story. I am sure there are more innocent bake sale moms out there! ;)
A really sweet story.
And hot too. I liked the way you started it. Now I'll be looking at random, normal women and wondering what goes on in their minds, in the privacy of their homes, behind closed doors.
(The thermometer is not a vote. It's just been left at default.)
Very Nice!
This was great for a first effort, LM. I caught a few spelling mistakes, but that didn't make this any less of a sweet story. You should be very proud of your work.
Skillfully Respectful & Lusty
Finally an interracial story that wasn't warped or sick.
Why can't others understand what you do. We (the semi-norm)can get into the black on white if it is part of the story and the characters and you respect each other and us.
What a start milady. Sensitive and shyly direct connect here and made this a very good read.
Thanks
A great Mature Woman Story
We have so few good erotic stories about women in their forties or even fifties that I rejoice when I read a well written one. It has always been a pet peeve of mine that women in our age group are so seldom written about in erotica. Kudos to you and I look forward to your second effort.
great!
nice job!
Werd
Oh so lovely.
Wonderful little story! Some authors struggle for years to pack so much feeling, emotion, and history into such a few words. I hope that you are serious about this gift that you have. Either you have one hell of an erotic imagination or you have suduced your tennis instructor. No matter that he was an easy mark! The truely beautiful part of the tale is the self realization that your protagonist gained and the healing that your readers are privileged to witness in this little gem.
Beautiful
What a beautiful story! Can't wait till your next one is up. Congrats :)
Great story
For your first try, it was great!!! Please continue writing...
take a moment to at least give me a smile.
Wonderful, mom. You have talent. I hope you will continue to entertain us with new stories.
Well Done!
God! That was great. I really have to move to America and start playing tennis.
you should most certainly have started
writing sooner, so we would have much more wonderful stories to read.
HOT!
Maharat
Excellent Writing
I don't have much interest in the subject you wrote about, but your writing skills and talent are obvious. I always enjoy a well-written story. Keep up the great work.
Splendid scenario
Very sensual, it affects me in the most wonderful way. I could picture this with ease. Thank you, though I would like Mark to be a little less confident. Perhaps for a moment. I found it very sexy indeed.
Simply Wonderful
I was hooked and could not tear myself away. Superbly written.
Great story
I read a lot of porn. This is not porn, it is however erotica at it's best. I suppose I should have read the other stories and compiled all my comments but was so taken with the excellence of this piece I had to drop a note immediately. Don't worry, I will be reading the rest as I am sure they will be as good or better. Will write again when I get to the juicy end. Thanks again to the author for her efforts.
My kind of woman
Very good, this lady is the kind of woman I like.
Loved Your Contradictions
I loved the realistic feelings you portrayed as you switched back and forth between your experiences as an older divorced wife and as the lover of a younger man.
A lesson for all men!
Your story is terrific. Well written, but a profound lesson on how we perceive each other. All of us, young and old should read it. Stop and tell those "invisible" woman and men you encounter every day, how great they look. I've done it and was told how I made someone's day with one small comment.
Beautiful story!
Wonderful writing of a longing many women feel. Thanks you for writing it!
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