All Comments on 'An Evening On the Beach'

by bicurmifemfantasy

Sort by:
  • 5 Comments
AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
LOVING ON BEACH

I LOVED YOUR STORY !!! MAYBE SOME WATER SEX ,BATH OR JACUZZI SEX!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
LOVING ON BEACH

I LOVED YOUR STORY !!! MAYBE SOME WATER SEX ,BATH OR JACUZZI SEX!!!!!!

alyna_808_9alyna_808_9over 14 years ago
good

man... you need some spelling checks!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Nice story but

Nice story but the grammatical errors are distracting.

NC22371NC22371over 9 years ago
Spell check

I'm tired of reading stories that even the dumbest 13 year old would catch.

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous