All Comments on 'Sally Doubles Up'

this story doesnt even make sense, it tells nothing of what the hubby does about it or what. i didnt even finish reading, it was that bad

I don't know what the other reader was objecting to. You didn't go into unnecessary details about the husband and that is good. It would have detracted from the focus point of the story: the wife's first double-team.

The sex scenes were hot and described very well, I could see it happening in my mind as I read it. This is the first story of yours that I've read, but I'm going to look for more.

By the way, the sponteniety in the story was wonderful! What woman wouldn't want to take those two young men inside and fuck them both?!

The story would have been much more erotic if Sally had been urgently waiting for her husband to get home (and he did not) so she and her husband could possibly start a baby inasmuch as she was ovulating, and those two teenaged studs came over and fucked her barebacked instead....

The script was followed jollie well mate - shame you couldn't watch on your anniversery and all.

Read the one posted immediately below it, same day, in the Anal section.

nice short story

You would have us think that wives are just sluts that are ready to get an std, pass it on to the husband, get pregnant by the village idiot who happens to have a thirteen inch cock but has an iq of 51,

Now maybe wives do fuck others besides their husband and the husbands do jerk off to it. But really isn't your story the kind that should be in scfi or far out fairy tales...?

I loved it. I was cumming as I read your story. wishing it was me getting doublely filled

JOAN @ THE JERSEY SHORE

Cheating whore not from the Jersey Shore.

All the stories are about slut wife!!! All women are sluts, whores get paid for sex, sluts give it away!!!