- All
Comments (2) - Add a
Comment - Send
Feedback Send private anonymous feedback to the author (click here to post a public comment instead).
| Literotica Toy Store ADULT TOY & DVD STORE FAST & DISCREET |
Literotica XXX Webcams 24/7 LIVE CAMS - FREE PREVIEW W/AUDIO! |
Literotica Adult Movies STREAMING ADULT MOVIES PAY PER MINUTE |
English
Great stories
I have read many of your submissions and they are just grand. From time to time I got so interested in the story line that I actually skipped thru some of the erotic bits! What a waste.
Your writing is wonderful and inspite of the above, the descriptions of the erotic sexual activities and phantasies are marvelous and sexually arousing.
I'm going back to read the rest of your work and hope you continue to submit these adventures of your various well hung, beautifully breasted and tasty cunted heros and heroines, respectively
Critique not criticism
I have read a number of your Novellas, and thoroughly enjoyed them. I have to agree with your own ideas, that background is most important. It is only with background and characterisation that the reader can actually visualise the people involved. With that advantage the erotic scenes are read with 'colour'. Too many of the stories on this site concentrate solely on the sex. Sex between cardboard cut-outs is of little interest. I have more of your submissions to read, and look forward to many evenings of warmth in their company.
Click here to leave your own comment on this submission! or
Back to Comments or
More submissions by TonyDowse.