All Comments on 'Undercover Ch. 10'

by Ada Stuart

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
need more!!

its all heating up very nicely, I can hardly wait to read the next chapter

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
great build up!

humourous, and great continuation of this story

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
great chapter

Another great chapter. Thank you :)

SAV12SAV12almost 5 years ago
OOOH BOY

OOOH BOY. WHAT YOU DOIN' EDDIE! DO YOU KNOW WHY SLEEPING DOGS SHOULD LIE? THEY BITE REAL HARD IF DISTURBED.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Bloody Morons

Cade and Warren that is, couldn’t he just bite the bullet and be honest about being in love with her? I’m sure it would get better results. Obviously we’re headed towards a HEA but what he’s trying here is another way to humiliate her.

I love your stories, I’d never have guessed that English isn’t your native language.

Tess (UK)

Ada StuartAda Stuartabout 4 years agoAuthor
To Tess from Ada Stuart

"Bloody Morons. Cade and Warren that is, couldn’t he just bite the bullet and be honest about being in love with her? I’m sure it would get better results. Obviously we’re headed towards a HEA but what he’s trying here is another way to humiliate her.

I love your stories, I’d never have guessed that English isn’t your native language.

Tess (UK)"

- Haha, I agree, Tess :-) I guess I would have written it a bit differently these days, after MeToo and everything :-) Still, I just couldn't resist turning the tables a little bit :-)

And about the native language: Thanks :-) That is a very big compliment :-) Had it not been for my excellent editors, Word and Grammarly, there would be little doubt about my native language, I'm afraid :-) But, I'm learning, so feel free to let me know if there are any spelling mistakes in my stories :-)

fantasy57fantasy57almost 3 years ago

Is it possible that Warren can set things straight for them by setting the stage to get them back together where they belong?

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