All Comments on 'The Pics of My Wife'

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ErotonautErotonautover 17 years ago
Dumb

This has got to be one of the dumbest plotlines I've ever read. Guy sends a complete stranger a photo of his wife, and the recipient is able to trace him via.. what? His internet account? A ouija board? Sorry, that - and the odd use of English - just blew it for me from paragraph one.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
I agree--Few people are that STUPID

And for a story that's posted in an erotic site it's hard to imagine the creep who would find it erotic.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
rediculous

Rediculous story. Noone could be as stupid as the dumb protagonist of your story. the Ct. Yankee

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
the intelligence of

the site is getting less and less each day. Is imagination so dead that someone has to resort to tripe such as this

ErotonautErotonautover 17 years ago
Check this out

If you want to see how a real erotic story can work, check out Literotica member Selenakittyn's library.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
bad

Obviously, English is not your first language. But I'm not even sure it's your second. Work on a believable plot, then use an editor to make your story palatable to an English speaking audience.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
You MUST be Kidding!

This was an insult to ALL the readers of Literotica. Try again with a more believable plot and better grammar, please.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Not original

This story isn't original. I've seen it before somewhere.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
its good!

i have seen something like this, but its still a hot story baby, do part II please!

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
it was gr8

it got me hot like anything.... yeah the plot mite be inspirational but the buildup is exquisite.. forget bout these sick coments dude.. come up with part two

creepingsexcreepingsexover 17 years ago
it was gr8

it got me hot like anything.... yeah the plot mite be inspirational but the buildup is exquisite.. forget bout these sick coments dude.. come up with part two

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Warum schreibst Du nicht auf Deutsch?

Heiß!!! Bitte fortsetzen!

hedi6789hedi6789over 16 years ago
urgh!

i'm also german and english is not my mother tounge but all these grammar mistakes annoy me, too! apart from that, is this guy dumb or what? he sends pictures of his topless wife to a complete stranger and then wonders that said stranger doesn't keep them to himself... this story is an embarassment!!!

HerrmannFrackerHerrmannFrackerabout 16 years ago
Ich find's gut

Ich mag diese Ideen. Heimliche Phantasien?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

This is just stupid

What more can be said

26thNC26thNCover 2 years ago

Husband is one dumb mofo.

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