My Wife's Car Damaged

I guess something got lost in the translation

Like your mind. Come on three black guys. The husband lets the wife drive alone through a forest. She get offered 2000 to spend the weekend...I guess there are kids in other countries trying to write sex storys...go to bed little boy/

I hope you haven't quit your day job!

W.T.F.

Silly unintelligent shit, waste of space!

dessous

dessous ???

Not a good story....Nicht gut.

This is not good. Do not continue this story....Das ist nicht gut. Setzen sie diese geschichte nicht fort.

Unintelligible writing horrible story

Nice try

I liked the subject matter. Unfortunately it doesn't seem to translate into English that well. I would keep going though as there is nothing wrong with having command of a second language. Good try.

Bullshit

You know it is a piss-poor story when the queer asseater calling herself bazzeee comments favorably.

Dreadful nonsense

Unintelligible. Unreadable. No more, please.

Unreadable

There wasn't enough of a story in this to make extended commentary worthwhile. Enough said.

Oh Mr. Anonymous you're such a fruit

You have to know the story was okay when that pussy Mr. Anonymous too effeminate to even leave a name and thus an email address. These are the kind of closeted shemales that can do nothing with their uncreative lives so they get their kicks trying to bring down others.

HUH???

THIS WAS WRITTEN BY A TOTAL ILLITERATE!!!

You..Me...Long Time...Short Time.....

Having traveled to China and the orient, I can recognize the halting, broken English writings of someone who may have the desire but not the ability to properly communicate in the way that the English speaking world is used to. You can see the attempt but the easy flow is interrupted too much to be enjoyed. But I'll tell you.....there are sure beauties over there!

what is this?

dessous? say what? the other lack of acknowledgement of the english language? her damaged car? i guess it stopped running so its damaged? and these good samaritans want her for weekend...and so on. the problem is...everthing about this story

please send the next part

get an editor

You need an editor to make your story flow better. It was stilted and rough reading.

writing skills

Please go back to school and learn how to use English.

Poor

This was POORLY narrated. Learn how to read and write english