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superb
in my opinion... I liked the poems perspective and literary artistic path
mention
this poem was mention on the thread 'New Poem Reviews'
thanks for the literary journey (~_~)
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Well done piece
Inspires imagery in the reader's mind
Of someone alone at the beach
Waiting for their special
Grain of sand...
Wonderful imagery!
I really like the way this provokes the imagination and wonder what it is like for those who love ... and for those who want to be loved.
Regards, DJ
But mastering imagery in the meantime!
I am with DJ full heartedly! Fantastic play of shifting imagery, when in a moment the sand is like an hour glass between the fingers of the sitting person, and next the “glass of hours” indicates that time itself is sifted through the fingers, and maybe the person him/herself (like us all) is but one of the pieces which are ”sitting in the sand of hour glass”… And that is only one such shifted image!
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