All Comments on 'Marissa's Lesson'

"Being in a new country was strange and hard for Marissa. Not only did she have trouble understanding the language" - the quote is surely a reflection on your poor grasp on the English language, Get a damn editor at least before submitting.

i love the dominant male/ naiv teenager......give me more.....

even love the way you use direct conversation...insted of tellwhat they said....

and to the other comments all i have to say is....omg its just a fantasy....get a grip

UR story was way to short. Better have a part 2! It was a good story.

You misspelled "sheer", he had "his hand in his hand", and there was some Spanish (I believe the 2nd set) where it made no sense.