by techsan
this is a really nice sexy romantic story.... about how lost souls finding each other. I am not sure WHY the author thought this was going to draw a strong reaction
Techsan,
You are a very good writer and an outstanding editor. I'll read anything you write and I'd be surprised if I didn't like something.
Techsan...again...another great job! I still love reading your stories even though we don't get to chat much anymore!
I hope you are well!
Karen_c_1973
A great story about a connection that neither was expecting... I love it!
Like an earlier comment, I too am confused. What in your story could ever put someone off? There is no gratutious violence, only enough to get the mission accomplished. Two pretty nice characters with a chance to start a relationship based on more than mere attraction. Good for the 'hearts and minds'.
Semper Fi
I always like "bullies" getting their due. As a former Marine I appreciated the 4-1 combat. One observation though.....If he has a "stick" (we trained with pugel sticks to simulate rifles with bayonets) an enemy would NEVER get close enough to swing a fist.
A beautiful story! I too lost my wife and miss her every day. I really enjoy your writings techsan.