All Comments on 'Forced Together'

by techsan

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Harryin VAHarryin VAover 17 years ago
nice story-- whats the big deal

this is a really nice sexy romantic story.... about how lost souls finding each other. I am not sure WHY the author thought this was going to draw a strong reaction

DesertPirateDesertPirateover 17 years ago
Very good!

Techsan,

You are a very good writer and an outstanding editor. I'll read anything you write and I'd be surprised if I didn't like something.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Great Job

Techsan...again...another great job! I still love reading your stories even though we don't get to chat much anymore!

I hope you are well!

Karen_c_1973

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Great Story

A great story about a connection that neither was expecting... I love it!

ReduxBlueReduxBluealmost 17 years ago
Great Story!

Like an earlier comment, I too am confused. What in your story could ever put someone off? There is no gratutious violence, only enough to get the mission accomplished. Two pretty nice characters with a chance to start a relationship based on more than mere attraction. Good for the 'hearts and minds'.

Semper Fi

oldwayneoldwayneover 11 years ago
A really nice little romance.

Thanks for the story. Five Stars!

Chief3BlanketChief3Blanketabout 7 years ago
Very nice story.

The title says it all.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
nicely done

I always like "bullies" getting their due. As a former Marine I appreciated the 4-1 combat. One observation though.....If he has a "stick" (we trained with pugel sticks to simulate rifles with bayonets) an enemy would NEVER get close enough to swing a fist.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Sweet!

What's there not to love?? .

TexMan1970TexMan19709 months ago

A beautiful story! I too lost my wife and miss her every day. I really enjoy your writings techsan.

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