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You know how wonderful
I think this one is. Beautifully written, sweet, hot sex, and lots of emotions. I'm in awe of your work on this story, it's amazing.
read it and weep!
i love this series and that was a beautiful chapter - i was almost tearful at the end...
Wonderful, thank u
Rach
Nice
A sweet little tale of redemption and self sacrifice.
Well done.
Beautiful
story of setting wrongs right.
You did well with the emotions and the sex was sweet.
Black Tulip
A beautiful blend...
A beautiful blending of erotic, tender and inspirational...I particularly liked the way he went about righting wrongs as penance for past misdeeds...
Can't wait for the next Laresa chapter ;)
Talented work of erotica
Everything flows great in this story. . . it is excellent and very well told. *bows and smiles on the rise up. . .* Thanks for writing with us. :) ~ Red
Simply teriffic
Darkniciad:
This is one outstanding tale and your input has done nothing to diminish it's quality. Thank You. Ronnie W.
Awesome
Simply awesome!
Excellent continuation with the chain...
I loved this story, thanks heaps, Darkniciad. It was very well written, and the storyline was quite unique with regards to the main character who is trying to right past wrongs. I like how he tried to save her in the end, with such a sweet lie.
Loved it!
WOW! great tale, with a deep character! I lvoed the twist ending, that was just an awesome bit of story telling!
Awwwwww!!! I just loved that!
You are sooo good! I just love your stories. Thanks so much for sharing them.
Well done.
Jerry
wonderful
as always
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